Use this space here to give me more general feedback.  I don't take criticism very well so don't be narked if I ignore you or delete your post. Yes your entitled to your opinion but your not entitled to piss on my chips.  If you think you can do a better job than me please do.  As an avid reader I was put off writing for years by thinking I could never dare compete with my favourite authors but then I had an epiphany I don't have to be as good as my favourite authors  I have just have to be slightly better than the authors I hate.